Research Synthesis first draft

The research paper should be the full version of the paper you propose in the abstract, which should be at least a little bit related to the topic you wrote about in your annotated bibliography.

How did you get from social media presence to operations management?

I just graded both your annotated bib and abstract: please review my feedback.

I noticed a common point for improvement: you need more working knowledge of your topic. You seem to have at least a working understanding of both genres, but you’re not commanding them, yet, in a way that effectively applies those genres to a discourse community. Your topic changes really prevent you from developing the type of knowledge that you need to write an effective paper. I was really struck by the way that the second paragraphs in your annotated bib only mildly gestured at putting together your different sources into a cohesive research project, and the abstract, similarly, didn’t engage with the material beyond superficial claims and gestures about big questions that, while they might be relevant, really aren’t research informed. You’re not yet thinking deeply enough about your topic or writing to the proper audience. If your claims and statements don’t refer to specific evidence from the text and speak to *precise concerns* raised by other members of your discourse community, the final projects can’t succeed.

I’m not really sure what to tell you to do with your paper. You switched topics so radically that it’s difficult to tell which are you know more about. Pick one of those topics and write a research synthesis.

I guess I’d suggest using the social media topic since you have sources for it, but you’ll need to find an appropriate CFP and narrow your research question significantly (see feedback).

Please follow up with me. Again, I’m really busy the next few days with pressing personal matters, but I can try and offer directive feedback here and there. The most helpful thing would be for you to narrow your focus and tell me what question, precisely, you want to answer, and it can’t be so broad that you ask about “all businesses.”

You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.


9 Responses to “Research Synthesis first draft”

  1. For the “letter to the editor,” can one send his/her blog post to the editor. The instructions say: “Letters to the editor should only be sent to The Times, and not to other publications. We do not publish open letters or third-party letters.”. . Does that mean blog posts, too?. . Thanks a lot..

  2. 819316 368746If you are interested in imagine a alter in distinct llife, starting up generally the Los angeles Surgical procedures fat reduction method is really a large movement in order to accomplishing which normally notion. lose belly fat 340025

  3. moved here says:

    639636 506791Its rare knowledgeable folks within this topic, nevertheless, you seem like theres far more you are talking about! Thanks 822457

  4. 909787 147394Bookmarked your amazing website. Fabulous function, special way with words! 118984

  5. Jake Medwell says:

    359501 87423magnificent submit, very informative. I ponder why the opposite experts of this sector dont realize this. You ought to proceed your writing. Im confident, youve an excellent readers base already! 455816

  6. 158362 473724This will be a fantastic website, will you be involved in doing an interview about just how you created it? If so e-mail me! 346999

  7. 710625 226368An interesting discussion is worth comment. I think which you require to write far more on this matter, it might not be a taboo topic but usually individuals are not enough to speak on such topics. Towards the next. Cheers 347731

  8. cc dumps says:

    811886 663293Aw, it was an very very good post. In thought I would like to set up writing related to this moreover – taking time and actual effort to create a quite excellent article but exactly what do I say I procrastinate alot and also no indicates manage to go done. 68112

Leave a Reply

Powered by WordPress | Designed by: buy backlinks | Thanks to webdesign berlin, House Plans and voucher codes